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Eternity Complex is the story about a girl called Fae, the people she meets, and the adventure she has as she tries to figure out why she's been whisked away to a mystifying and often frightening new world.

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3rd Aug 2015, 8:20 AM in Chapter14
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zartala edit delete
zartala
I really love that top panel, the faces came out really well. I don't know what went wrong with that last panel. If only I could draw everyone more consistently.
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Centcomm edit delete reply
Centcomm
It looks great .. love your colors! :D
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
Thanks so much! XD
MadJak91 edit delete reply
MadJak91
This is that page when I can say that I really like your character designs.
You usually pay less attention when reading through the archive or during an intense moment.
Especially Adrik. He looks marvelous and has the right "feminine touch" to him.

You are one person here that I cannot say anything about the style other than: "This is zartala."

Poor Bjorn. Reduced to a head and always looking up when speaking :D :D <3
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
Awwwwww thanks so much!!! XD Your comment has pretty much made my day!

I especially love your observation about Adrik! When he was alive, he was the oldest brother to a bunch of sisters and I wanted that influence to show through. Of course there's more to his design than having a bunch of sisters but spoilers.

Poor Bjorn, indeed! :) If he had more of a commanding presence, his height wouldn't be as obvious. Enya is shorter than he is (when she's not using her magic), but she's a lot better about taking up space. :)
Ninabird edit delete reply
Ninabird
I love Bjorn, always has something considered to say.
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
I'm so glad that that is noticeable about him! XD I worry that because he's one of, if not the quietest cast member that his personality never really gets a chance to shine.

Also, I like that about Bjorn, too! :)
TheD-Wrek edit delete reply
TheD-Wrek
Heh, love the expressions on their faces. They've been especially great the last few updates. :)
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
Thanks so much! XD