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Eternity Complex is the story about a girl called Fae, the people she meets, and the adventure she has as she tries to figure out why she's been whisked away to a mystifying and often frightening new world.

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9th Feb 2015, 4:07 PM in Chapter14
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zartala
Meanwhile, on the surface...

I decided to make some small changes to the art, starting with this chapter. What do you think? Is it even noticeable?

image Also, the start of the new chapter brings with it a new piece of art! There's always something very dignifying about black and white portraits. I received this portrait of Marie over the weekend from the guys over at Iron Gate. Iron Gate doesn't have many pages online yet but what's currently up hints at a very interesting story to come.
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Spelledeg edit delete reply
Spelledeg
'The Diversion was a mistake' OOo that's an interesting phrase to start the chapter on.

We already know Enya has alternate...plans ish. But she's way too calm about everything. (I still want to assume the best for her though)

Beautiful page, Zartala. The lineart seems a bit looser/more active. But I'm not sure what other changes you've made. It seems more precise in its looseness.(If that makes sense)
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
I wish I could actually comment on Enya's intentions and motivations without keeping things extremely vague. But, on the bright side, one of her objectives will be a lot clearer by the end of the chapter.

I'm glad you like the page! :) That totally makes sense, by the way, and I completely take that as a compliment. :) I've always envied artists who can use loose strokes to create space and I've been experimenting with that some, especially with backgrounds.

Though, I'm kind of glad that the biggest change that I think I made has gone unnoticed. The change caused me a bunch of anxiety because I changed something that I felt had becomes a huge part of my drawing style... but another reader wants the chance to figure out what it is, so I'm not going to reveal the change I'm talking about unless it gets guessed. But the fact that it hasn't been obvious, has helped me feel like the change was worth making.
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Spelledeg
I know, it's a spoiler! :) But I can see some of the hinting going on. You've set it up really well! I'm excited to see what'll happen and where my hunches are.

Oh good it made sense! :D Definitely keep it up!

I think I may have picked up on what you changed now that you mention it was a major facet of your style. There are a few less drawn lines in the hair. I'm not sure if that is what you've changed, but it looks very good.
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zartala
I know you know it's a spoiler. :) I'm just really impatient to get to the pages where all is revealed. It takes all of my will power to stay quiet because of how excited I am about where the plot is heading.